One response to “Chapter 7 (parts 31-35)”
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There’s just something about this story that just always brings me back to reading it. It’s Rachel and her situation, I just love ideas like her situation, it feels like if one thing went her way she’d be free from the snowballing situation, but whether from decisions made about her without her or by even her own indecisiveness it seems her spiral of depravity and arousal is inevitable.
Like in this chapter if Eric had a bit more balls he’d tell her what it was, maybe that’d make her more suspicious. If Ellie in the previous chapter thought more about Rachel instead of getting her own pinnacle.
It’s a perfect concoction from all places that keeps Rachel’s story going. Whether at home with Eric’s mom or with Coach Ron.
I wonder if Bystander even knows how effective his plan has been so far with Rachel? I wonder if he will ever get to see her, even from the crowd. Did even he think Rachel could go this far? It feels like she is the one in a million chance and every piece perfectly fit.
Your stories are all amazing, I can’t wait to read whatever story is updated next, this one just is my favorite.
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