4 responses to “Chapter 12 (parts 51-55)”
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I’ve read the whole thing in the last couple of weeks and it is definitely my favorite story of all time. I don’t know if I will ever find a new story that will even come close to that. I am sad that it’s already over. I was really interested in what the other device is that coach Ron and his friend wanted to give Rachel. And how Rachel’s school lives and the situation with her mother continues and if she will have more embarrassing situation throughout her school life or how her prom dance will be or how other subjects in school are like P.E. when she is naked there for example and stuff like that. wish it would’ve been longer but it’s still awesome work. I loved the characters and how they interacted with each other. I would’ve loved it if coach Ron had the chance to touch or pat Rachel’s body or behind again or if Eric somehow would’ve had the chance to inspect her body more closely when she sleeps or something, but even though it’s the end, I loved the story and Rachel and I’m happy that I had the chance to read it.
Thank you for such an amazing book.
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I love hearing from a new reader who has a fresh perspective. I will happily finish this story if it gets enough votes.
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There are many questions left in this story and they do still feel so close and so far, it’s really exciting to be able to read it basically all in one place. I hope Tommy does actually get to see Rachel in all her glory, and as well as that I hope that Eric and by product his family are somewhere in the crowd from teased eplilogue. That would be great!
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I will finish the story if it gets enough votes.
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