2 responses to “Chapter 17”
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Wow, that went in a very unexpected direction! So unexpected I can barely imagine where this story goes next. Apart from wishing Frank ends up seeing her in this harness, either here in the barn or later. I suspect he will entirely approve. Of the girl-bridle that is. I’m sure he won’t approve of her heart-shaved pubes.
Now, let me guess… Percy has made off with the money and is nowhere to be found? Or maybe knot (!!!) It’s remarkably strange he happened to be able to improvise that so-perfect girl-bridle in virtually no time at all. If he didn’t; if that is tack Percy ‘just happened’ to have at hand, well that opens up some wild plot potentials.
‘Remote desert community of bondage kings’ kind of thing, Bishop style. Maybe Frank knew about it, and was bringing the family there for a holiday surprise? Or maybe he didn’t know but finds he approves a lot, and decides to stay?
In which case, is it ENF, or is it ENF =and= fully controlled teen males? Makes a big difference for Frankie.
The frustrating part, is I can’t comment on this in girlspns forum! Arrgh!
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“girl-bridle” lol, someone should patent that! I’ve never had a story develop as easily as this one. It’s like I can see it spread out before me – all the scenes, all the twists and turns (no spoilers, but there are more to come) just waiting to be written. I’m glad to see others are just as excited to read as I am to share it. It’s just too bad “Dare Me” has been beating it out in the monthly poll lately. But I will be adding another chapter to the back shelf soon. And don’t worry, I wouldn’t abandon girlspns. I’ll get around to posting more of it there eventually.
btw, your instincts on Percy are correct. That man should not be trusted.
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