4 responses to “Chapter 21 (Day 4)”
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lol another chapter ending on a massive tease. Can’t wait for the next one.
Didn’t they both used to torment the protagonist by always sticking up for each other against him? Perhaps the carrot of getting to wear the skimpy clothing only he can provide (and maybe the stick of being made to wear the girl bridle instead), could be used to make both naked sisters compete against each other and then argue and fight amongst themselves?
I might be jumping a few steps ahead here, but I also wouldn’t object to a scenario where Beatrice has to give herself a matching love heart bush. Or Mary has to do it for her. Or she isn’t allowed any body hair at all.
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Thank you for your comments. If you didn’t expect a cliffhanger, you haven’t been reading my material very long. lol
You are correct that the girls (the older ones, especially) used to team up against Frankie. But it’s probably safe to say that, along with their clothes, they have mostly lost that fighting spirit. They have bigger things to worry about these days, if you know what I mean.
You also have an intriguing theory about Frankie making the sisters compete or battle. But pitting them against each other only creates jealousy and strife – the very thing his father abhors. Wouldn’t a better approach be to continue finding ways to promote familial harmony and goodwill? Make love, not war 😉
As for Bea’s body hair, there is another big reveal coming. But don’t bother asking. I’m not going to spoil the surprise.
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Without expecting any answers, I’m going to take a guess that Beatrice doesn’t have any body hair at all for some reason. That would probably be the thing that would surprise the family the most and I’d imagine it would be a rather popular outcome among readers.
Can we just call Mary and Bea competing for what would normally be a degrading outfit some friendly sibling rivalry? Or tell them not to bicker in front of the parents or they get extra girl bridle time? lol, or force them to regularly to hug, kiss and make up.
You’ve done a fairly good job at keeping Cindy out of the fray, I wouldn’t have considered her part of the other two previously ganging up on Frankie, at least not very often or with any malice. I’m not sure if she’s scheduled for losing any clothes, but if she is I hope it’s either a more temporary thing or something she can get some sort of carefree enjoyment out of. She simply hasn’t been set up as an insufferable brat that ‘deserves’ an epic fall from grace.
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Ha ha poetic justice. I suppose it’s unlikely Beatrice will quiet down, and so Frankie may offer to solve that problem with his souvenirs – the girl bridle and restraints. I have a hunch Frank would be impressed.
Well, the suspense is literally dripping… and knocking…
Gosh, it would be a shame if the car broke down now, far from anywhere, and the only place they could stay was a small, very primitive one room cabin. Or maybe they have a tent? Why, it could take weeks to get the necessary car parts.
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