4 responses to “Chapter 23”
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Damn you continue to come up with great settings, and the story as a whole is just phenomenal. Great work
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Wow, thank you! I thrive on feedback, so hearing from a new reader means a lot to me. I don’t want to spoil anything, but there’s plenty more coming. If you’ve liked it so far, you won’t be disappointed.
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Such a wonderfully chaotic mix of factors! The two sisters naked but so unequal in their deals with Frankie! The steady progression of his power, with strong support from Frank.The world fair! “ingenuity, modern marvels, and cultural contributions from all corners of the globe” OK, so I wonder what the world fair’s equivalent of an inventive huckster cowboy will be? Ha ha! I could sit here dreaming up kinky scenarios all day. But I’d rather wait and see what NeverDoubted has in mind.
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The way the stakes constantly ramp up in your stories is always amazing. These sisters don’t know what Frankie may choose to do, how far he may go. I hope that somehow, it does come back around on Frankie, if only for a bit!
I love all of your stories!
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