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2 responses to “Chapter 4 (Parts 8-12)”

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    Themarble

    I love how Rachel’s outfits just get worse and worse for her. She’s still resilient and powers through but she’s being tested. It’s been building up but I hope that she will eventually be made to go to school naked. I hope Susan is the one that finally orders her after Rachel inevitably loses and or destroys her last clothing! Even if Susan isn’t directly involved I know it’s going to be one hell of a chapter with the foreshadowing in the chapter.

    “Her third chance would come by the end of the week; but not by choice. And the third time did not turn out so well.”

    Such an exciting chapter! I cannot wait to see what’s planned for the rest of part 4! The tension building by you in each of your stories constantly has my heart racing!!!

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      Themarble

      On re-read I see I have misunderstood when the third time was going to come. This will be her third time roaming the school naked and I cannot wait to see what happens,I do however hope it is in the plans that at somepoint Rachel loses the rest of her clothes and Susan sends her to school without anything.

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