7 responses to “Chapter 9 (Parts 33 – 37)”
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The connection to the bonus story with Johanna and the foreshadowing for the prairie settler project is awesome. I love the whole universe of Bystander that you created and I’m looking forward for future updates of these stories!!
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Thanks! I hope the stories do get told.
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A pleasure to re-read this story with better formatting than in the archive on GPNS. Do you have any plans to extend this story beyond the point were it ended originally? It would be great to see more of Pip (and everyone else, really) tormenting Rachel, in addition to what we have coming up.
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I’m going to finish it!
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Amazing!
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A lot to unpack in this chapter. Rachel still being under the idea that she has clothes waiting for her is, cute! And now her pinnacle is starting to act up in the bus, now is that because of the road like Rachel suspects, or does this have a part to play in the fact swim captain Pip has the remote? I can’t wait to find out!
Now a line that I missed on my first read resurfaced and was a lot more interesting in my opinion,
“A lavish reward will be interpreted by her subconscious as compensation; making her physical exposure worth it.”
The bit I find interesting is that I can imagine the only thing in Rachel’s subconscious, other than clothing perhaps, would be her need to cum.
Not sure if this was in the plans or not, I just found it a exciting idea. I can’t wait for more thornwood next month, I don’t even know how far we are from the end (I hope we have a large heaping of chapters left) and I can’t wait to see how much further Rachel can be pushed! With the pinnacle and her nude exposure!
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Exhibitionist in a nut shell?
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